That's lovely.

wow i just realized how short-coming my vocabulary is... teach my these words of knowledge! ~*~ bows to you~*~

Romantic poetry touches more on individual worth, passion over reason, imagination and perception, rejection of established beliefs, significance of nature, etc. Though this doesn't quite fit into this mold, (and do forgive me for implying that it must)these are some other aspects of romantic poetry you might want to explore in an attempt "at writing some romantic poetry that isn't so corny you want to puke." Keep writing, k.