Aw! ='( that's so sad. Beautiful though. There were a few verses that didn't make much sense, but it's still very good. I know how you feel =/

*~Black and White Dreams~*

It's better in French. Your english is good, but not perfect, and some sentences don't make a whole lot of sense. Nice though, beautiful idea.

No mistakes here, awesome poem, but in a weird way, it made me feel dizzy. It sounds as if it were a song of some sort. I guess that's because the words looped around each other.