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| Jacky Wolf 2007-07-31 ch 4,  | abuseI thought this story was pretty good. I like anything that involves ships. I have to admit, my favorite part was the title. It reminded me of Catriona by Robert Louis Stevenson. I'll be sure to read your other stories. |
| Angelic Lucifer 2007-06-16 ch 3, | abusehm, sometimes i'm not really convinced that cait is 18. she seems even younger than that. i mean, i'm not sure what an 18 year old like myself would do in a pirate situation, but it seems that she just...i don't know. maybe it's the quick temper. she seems a lot younger. but kevin and galen are studs. there's no doubt about that. i guess it's just curious that all of the other pirates seem to have yellow-teeth, reek of blood and fish guts, and have no charm whatsoever. how come they're so lucky? i think i'm just secretly wishing that all pirates were so suave... |
| Angelic Lucifer 2007-06-16 ch 2, | abusesorry i've been away so long - school and all... BUT, i would like to say that this is an interesting twist. they're both scottish? in some way? i feel like they know her somehow, and that's how she knows so much about pirates. that would be exciting. if she were partly pirate blood? um, hands down, he's sexy. :D |
| moochacha 2007-01-15 ch 4, | abusenice |
| moochacha 2007-01-09 ch 3, | abusegetting better i like the unpredicitability of galen |
| Forgotten Love Letters 2007-01-05 ch 3, | abuseGreat story! I'm really into it and I love your characters. Can't wait to read more ^_^ |
| Dixie shiloh 2007-01-04 ch 2, | abuseSo, a word usage note, Laying should be lieing. people lie in bed, they lay a book down. other than that its great and as usual, i cant wait for an update |
| Waters 2006-12-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseThis is such a good story, and it is very well written. Did Galen meet her before he became a pirate? Did they even know each other, or is he just glad to meet someone from Scotland. Please update soon! |
| Dixie shiloh 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseWow i like this. nice start. i like the characters, and i want to see where it goes please update soon Dixie |
| Kenny's Friend 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseNot bad for a beginning. Not too many typos; the main character is a little self-confident of her beauty, however. lol I couldn't read in-depth, but what I got was good. Keep writing! |
| moochacha 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abusewow really good love it so far |
| Angelic Lucifer 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abusei'm not sure how you did it, but i really enjoy her character. i was trying to pinpoint it, but it must just be an overall arching magnificence. she shines. i like the accents you're offering people and the slightly different dialect (that's not the word i'm looking for, but something like it), but try to keep it up? i'm not sure how galen's supposed to come off. he seems kind of proper, but kind of pirate-y? keep updating! |
| Melika Elena 2006-12-12 ch 1, | abuseAlthough the plot of having a woman disguised as a man aboard a ship is over done and cliched, this story is intriguing simply because the men knew she was a woman right from the get-go. Good job; looking forward to your next update! |