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| kt in the sky 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abusewow. this is very good. i don't know how to explain the feeling it gives me... i geuss it comes across as a bit anxious. this is a great poem. and i like how the end is a bit hopeful. :] very nice!! |
| LoSt ReMeDy 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abusehi I seriously Love this poem the message EVERYTHING! (Sorry I'm a bit hyper=]) But anyways Keep writing! Keep Smiling LoSt ReMeDy |
| Guardian Of Hell 2007-09-15 ch 1, | abusefirst of all... thnx for reviewing me. second... its good ill slowly read all your work k bye |
| Tabi Berkey 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abusethis format really works for you. good job! |
| concerto49 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseThe bold stuff made it stand out more. Was it encouraging? It felt a little scary - was really graphical and all. Actually, it sort of was. Hm. Interesting. I liked the description. Cool. Anyhow. Cheers. |
| Nightmares.Of.A.Broken.Hear... 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was wonderful! Ah... i wish i were like that in real life... lol, im a pessimist but its a nice read xD |
| Sythiro 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseGo girl u rock! |
| kloun doll 2007-05-28 ch 1, | abuseyeah, it's so hopeful. |
| MistyRose14 2007-04-27 ch 1, | abuseone word - extraodinary. you are simply fantastic at composing poetry. trés bien! |
| Susuka 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseThis was very impressive and deep. I am in awe of how good you are at composing poetry. I hope one day to be as good as you, and I must thank you for that review. |
| Abysmal Tr3pidation 2007-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you've written this, it sort of just flows... ~**~Indiana~**~ |
| Ella-Watson 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abuseCool! I can't believe you're not on my author alerts list!! No wonder why! Lol. Love the poem. |
| poemkitten7 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseWHAT? I didn't read this. That's insane. Haha I haven't reviewed you in such a long time that I decided to come on your page to re-read some of your lovely work. And then I realize...I apparently never read this. O_o Okay okay well this is brilliantly written as always. Doesn't surprise me one bit. But all the same, it amazes me how you have such a beautiful way with words. The way you're always so optimistic towards the end of the poem gives the reader a sense of hope in life. Truly great. Keep up the wonderful work, Anna! =] -Sara |
| Sythiro 2007-03-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow this is great keep it up! Rowena |
| Charity F 2007-02-23 ch 1, | abuseI really like your style here - the way you've written it. How the words just flow on from each other onto the next line. And because i haven't exactly been reading fictionpress much lately, and expecially your works, which i profusely apologise, i can notice this huge leap in improvement of your writing... It sounds so sophisticated, so mature, like you're aware of everything... it's something from the heart, which i love. Thanks, and keep up this amazing work. |