|Reviews for i prefer to follow broken lines|
| lackluster 12/18/06 . chapter 1
"this feels like sex, and looks like rape,/a victimization of intimacy" and that last line, it's like realizing the truth again and again and again.
| The Reasons 12/14/06 . chapter 1
wow back. i love it.
| dress her up in fairytales 12/14/06 . chapter 1
the last line gave me chills.
| riotmaker 12/14/06 . chapter 1
i love all of your writing.
and the second stanza of this is just too gorgeous to be real.
| dollface and her cancer 12/13/06 . chapter 1
your writing's changed to suit winter. leather coats and flavored alcohol and all the things we bite our lips to keep from spilling out. hold onto it, chica. loveyou.
| no.peace.los.angeles 12/13/06 . chapter 1
Wow, this is almost painful to read. Your details are nice, but must be hell to live. "the vowels are sharp on my palms." Shit. That's amazing. Gorgeous work. Keep writing! :)