U write awesome songs there is feelings in ur songs and coz of dat it is da best and plz continue writingn them

Wow that was really great.OMg wow!

I enjoyed this-- wish I could hear the music. I like how the refrain was in the girl's voice. That was a nice touch. Keep writing. Truly, Tourterelle, relever de deuil

Great poem! I love the usage of rhythm and personification. It really catches the spot...if that makes sense.