An excellent story you've got here. You're very creative and it shows in your writing. Keep it up, and I can't wait for more :)

~carm~

'Kay, this is new... From what I know of Fang, I'm beginning to like him. (He kinda reminds me of Itachi from Naruto) Yeah. So... You know what that means... Update soon please??

You have a very interesting idea, please don't stop. I hope you will write more. I also love the way that you describe things, so keep it up! :)

I like it. It's a great idea you've got going so don't stop. Keep writing and update soon!

Oh, I remember this one. I love it, please finish it.

Looks like an interesting story. I'll be keeping my eye on it.

I like the new twists that you have applied to this chapter, especially the beginning... as with Vampire Affections, I'm really looking forward to reading new chapters.

I've read this part before I believe so my past comments still apply... you probably need to come in and space out the paragraphs, it's a little hard to read as it is.

Looks pretty good so far, looking forward to seeing a werewolf fight. The introduction was somewhat confusing but only because I wasn't expecting it in that form. Also the intro could start with the professor at the white house. Fang could explain the trial later on.