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| Carmel March 2007-04-18 ch 2,  | abuseAn excellent story you've got here. You're very creative and it shows in your writing. Keep it up, and I can't wait for more :) ~carm~ |
| Lyn-san 2007-01-30 ch 2, | abuse'Kay, this is new... From what I know of Fang, I'm beginning to like him. (He kinda reminds me of Itachi from Naruto) Yeah. So... You know what that means... Update soon please?? |
| this account is no longer o... 2007-01-24 ch 2, | abuseYou have a very interesting idea, please don't stop. I hope you will write more. I also love the way that you describe things, so keep it up! :) |
| Foreverswimming 2007-01-02 ch 2, | abuseI like it. It's a great idea you've got going so don't stop. Keep writing and update soon! |
| Foreverswimming 2006-12-25 ch 1, | abuseOh, I remember this one. I love it, please finish it. |
| Without A Muse 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseLooks like an interesting story. I'll be keeping my eye on it. |
| Tatiana Moore 2006-12-13 ch 2, | abuseI like the new twists that you have applied to this chapter, especially the beginning... as with Vampire Affections, I'm really looking forward to reading new chapters. |
| Tatiana Moore 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI've read this part before I believe so my past comments still apply... you probably need to come in and space out the paragraphs, it's a little hard to read as it is. |
| LightfootLee 2006-12-13 ch 2, | abuseLooks pretty good so far, looking forward to seeing a werewolf fight. The introduction was somewhat confusing but only because I wasn't expecting it in that form. Also the intro could start with the professor at the white house. Fang could explain the trial later on. |