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Klyne 2007-12-10 ch 73,	abuseYes, that sounds like a good idea.
Arya Darcy 2007-12-10 ch 73,	abuseSure! I think that would be an awesome revision. :)
Spirella 2007-11-28 ch 28,	abuseCMJ: Which teacher? Haha. Funny, Mr. Carpenter. Crystal: The one with the sickeningly neat hair. He combs it all the time. I think he’s obsessed with it. When the cursor blinked for several moments with no response, she couldn’t hold back a choppy snicker. CMJ: Diana. Aww, I'm so disappointed! I was really hoping that she'd be able to keep it from him that she knew he was the one talking to her on the internet for a little longer at least! I was hoping she could deceive him for a while... But I'm sure you've had your reasons and that I'll come to them in time!
me and a half 2007-10-31 ch 55, anon.	abuseI person can report a rape up to two years after the event and the police are very careful to warn them that the questioning will make it seem like they led the rapist on, but that is just the way it happens because the bastards try to so hard to make it out to be all lies.
SamanthaNicole 2007-09-22 ch 2,	abuseAnother lovely installment. I absolutely adore your writing, and your characters. You have quite a knack for reading into peoples' minds and putting those thoughts to paper. I was little confused about who Greg actually was, but I think that's all been cleared up. A few things: Round "brush" and natural "tan" don't need to be in quotes. The image you give the reader is enough. Also, if she's Puerto Rican, her skin is obviously going to be darker, so the tan isn't fake, which is what the quotes suggest. "...and then her upbeat, Sanguine personality shined through." Sanguine shouldn't be capitalized here. Also, you capitalize 'romanticist' and 'realist' quite often, but they don't need to be. Same goes for 'melancholic' and 'choleric.' "As the papers were past to the front..." 'past' should be 'passed.' Again, loved it. Looking forward to another chapter. Cheers, Sammy
SamanthaNicole 2007-09-22 ch 1,	abuseOoh, I'm intrigued. This was an EXCELLENT beginning. Everything, from the characters, to Diana's thoughts, was stunningly portrayed. Your writing is unique, and so is the idea for this story - good for you. I cannot WAIT for what comes next. Cheers, Sammy
Raven of Ice 2007-06-28 ch 71,	abuseI would throw tomatoes at you ;-) I cant see Jacob moving on, and Id like to see it work out. ~Rvn
Le Cosmonaute 2007-06-28 ch 71,	abuseI'd love to read something like that! It'd be so interesting!
The Jade Tipster 2007-06-28 ch 69,	abuseBeautiful story. It's really long, and it's remarkable that you're able to hold interest for such a while. Great job.
.tearsofthefallen. 2007-06-28 ch 71,	abuseI would throw tomatoes at you...It's just not right! I would read it, but I'd be very, very, very..depressed. And mad. And sad...
Ginne 2007-06-28 ch 71,	abuseI'm not completely opposed to that idea. though i do hope you would continue with Mad Night. either way, I still like the plot you outlined if diana did die, i will be here to support you with your experimentation with the story either way!
Lady Knight 1512 2007-05-11 ch 69,	abuseAw! I love it! What a beautiful ending! And what an amazing story. If that wasn't a roller coster, i don't know what was. I'm so glad i read it now. Diana and John are two of my fave characters of all time. They're so real, i could almost touch them. I could move on to the sequel if i want more of them i suppose, but it focuses on Grace and Jacob and i don't like them as much as Di and John. I'll probably end up reading it anyway, so don't worry. I'd like to thank you though, for writing something as incredible as this. I am truly inspired. ~LK1512~
Chaotic -Tragedy 2007-04-04 ch 69,	abuseI think a sequel would be awesome! Though i have to say, i liked The Rose and the Thorn and A Walk in the Rain more. I still loved this one but it does tend to get severely dark and depressing at times. The other story is just... lighter. Keep it up! -CT
bitterdeath 2007-04-01 ch 69,	abuseI can't wait for a sequel, it would be amazing!
Gwyn Baranof 2007-04-01 ch 69,	abuseWhat kind of sequel? I don't know. I don't really have an opinion either way. Go for it, or don't. This was a very appropriate ending. The Rose and the Thorn was sort of the same way. Well, anyway. Apparently, this past week was the wrong time to be gone. I completely missed the ending. Damn, I wish I could have reveiwed as they came out. This was very nicely done. I like this story better, although I wish John or Diana would have died. Considering I am not all that religious, that whole saving thing was not as effective for me. Although, I am sure it is for others. For me, death would have been the rememdy. For a minute, I was worried it was going to be a tragedy. Both of them dying? No, that would not have been good. I loved it, and if you decided to continue, then expect me to be there. So...brilliant job.

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