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wen are u goin to update

I like this very much.

Okay did I just sound like a simpleton or what?
SOrry, yesh, So I've been snickering, I cannot help it if I found your story highly entertaining and quite amusing now can I?

Anyway, I thought I should point out that there are a few typos, but obviously you can sort that out by reading over it.
Anyway...
I thoroughly enjoyed this,and am adding this to my alert list :)
Keep up the good work

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Oh..great story! Love it! Especially Paris and Tyler =)

Can't wait till you update..

Please, please update. I love this story.

awesome story! i like it lots ^^ paris/jess is so funni xD

AH!
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!
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pretty pretty please?
i will love you forever if you do.

oh i love that song here in my arms. great chapter, and great start to a promising story. I love all the characters so far. Although that Club VIP must be some dodgy nightclub because Ive never heard of anyone getting into a club in pj's or with a fake ID that obvious. But anyways lets just say for the sake of this story line that it is possible. Anyways cant wait to read more soon so PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!

LOL! this story is ahmazingg... love it ♥

i love this story! its cute! i love cliche stories and this has 3! cant wait for an update!
y would u pic the name jess over paris? i mean i hate paris hilton, but my names jessica and its such a boring name! (no offense meant to paris)

okay, pls update soon.

jessi

okay hi again awesome chapter! no complaints!! okay ignore my comment about Cairo's pic...wrong pic to comment I meant JACK'S pic...thats the hot one hahahahahahahaha no wonder Sydney likes him ahahahaha...don't mind me...=)

Okay imagine me singing this: Love it!

I like both POV's, Paris' and Tyler's story sounds like Color me Cliche...which I totally miss already, hope you put that up soon!

Sydney's and Jack's story is so cute ^_^ no negative feedbacks on this story...count me up as a fan!

oh and I looked at the pics for this story and they guys are hot lol especially Cairo's pic ahahahahaha...dont mind me!

This story is very very good. Way better than I expected. Update soon!!

:O!!

Okay, so I hate you for not updating Colour Me Cliche, and now I hate you for not updating THIS story!

>_< I feel so sorry for Sydney- Jack, eh, will they end up together? And...'Jess' and Tyler remind me of Ray and Grace- but it doesn't seem like he likes her at all.

O_O What if she falls for Tyler like Sydney fell for Jack?? Yow, keep writing!

Out-Spoken-Runaway

no i really like sydney's story as well! please don't change it...maybe just change around the way you do the switching POV thing, but don't get rid of it completely! i think it's a really great idea, and i love the whole 2 pov's thing, it's a great way to get perspective of the whole story and their world, and not a lot of people do it like this...it's like two stories together, slightly interlinked...now it's just the normal standard romance story which there are like a thousand of on here...

obviously it's your decision in the end, but i really quite liked reading a different style of story on here, and i've already gotten attached to sydney and jack as well! it's so funny how the two sisters are really different, and seeing their opposite perspectives on the same thing is so interesting

please please do the two pov thing again, if a lot of people are finding it confusing, then perhaps you could do one half of the chapter paris' pov, and the other sydneys, or you could do alternate chapters with each pov or something, i dunno, all i know is i'll really miss sydney's story if you don't continue with it, seriously do go on with it, it's a great storyline...

hope to see an update from you soon :) xx