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| Operation Miranda 2006-12-13 ch 1,  | abuseHm, the moral reminds me of that song "Make new friends, but keep the old, one is silver and the others will get revenge." Or something like that. Nice story, but you may wanna work on some mechanics. Try to keep your verb tenses consistent throughout the piece, specifically in the first paragraph. |