   Chocopuppyoncrack 2009-11-20 . chapter 8wait, so then this means that celie is dead?because she is with her mom,dad and brother... |
 MusicFreakkx3 2009-11-08 . chapter 1LOVE IT.! ;D
update sooner. (: |
 RainbowDinosaur 2009-08-12 . chapter 23Love this story please please update... |
 XxGOTHICxANGELxX 2009-07-30 . chapter 23LUV it I wanna no wat happens next! |
 kiki19857 2009-04-10 . chapter 23update? |
 12rct34 2009-04-05 . chapter 23PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE finish the story. My mind is dying trying to figure out what you were going to write. Its been awhile but the last chapter does say to bother you to write. So I am... hehe. |
 i-see-faeries 2009-03-11 . chapter 23This is very interesting, and cute. I think some parts move too fast though, and some parts seem pointless. But I love this. Still nicely done. |
 Tempre's Twilight 2008-09-22 . chapter 23Oh my! This story is so sad... and uncomplete! I'm going to cry, cause now I'll never know if they get their happily ever after. BUt it was amazing... |
 kirarin242 2008-03-15 . chapter 14wow i like :3 |
| kirarin242 2008-03-15 . chapter 13 lol too late...XD yay jakeie's back! |
| kirarin242 2008-03-15 . chapter 12 good |
| kirarin242 2008-03-15 . chapter 11 really good boring at the end tho...-_- |
| kirarin242 2008-03-15 . chapter 10 um...Yay! XD :)! |
| kirarin242 2008-03-15 . chapter 9 aw cute he said sorry :3 |
| kirarin242 2008-03-15 . chapter 8 that was so sad sorry i could not write for the other few chapters heh i was so into the story ! |
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