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| angel953 2008-02-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty cool... I like it. This line confused me: "Of ones is past"... Also how you kept saying "ones" befuddled me... I don't know if you meant that possessively or what...other than those couple things I think it was great. ~angel953 |
| Landon Stray 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseSpeechless. |
| the unreal 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuseTHANKS FOR MY PRESENT! i like you poemm i should put more on |
| Travis C. Eckert 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abuseSo are you trying to break out of this shell? R&R me too please. |
| Lil'Fleur 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseI understand what you live well, in the way I understand the poem( french-english dictionnary power ! lol) |
| Princess-anna57 2006-12-13 ch 1, | abuseAw, that's so sad! :( But very emotional, even in the few words that are used. Excellent. Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |