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Reviews For: The Mere Shell of Me

angel953
2008-02-26
ch 1,
abuseThis is pretty cool... I like it. This line confused me: "Of ones is past"... Also how you kept saying "ones" befuddled me... I don't know if you meant that possessively or what...other than those couple things I think it was great.

~angel953
Landon Stray
2007-02-02
ch 1,
abuseSpeechless.
the unreal
2006-12-26
ch 1,
abuseTHANKS FOR MY PRESENT!
i like you poemm
i should put more on
Travis C. Eckert
2006-12-16
ch 1,
abuseSo are you trying to break out of this shell? R&R me too please.
Lil'Fleur
2006-12-13
ch 1,
abuseI understand what you live well, in the way I understand the poem( french-english dictionnary power ! lol)
Princess-anna57
2006-12-13
ch 1,
abuseAw, that's so sad! :( But very emotional, even in the few words that are used. Excellent. Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^
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