that was good and fun to read! :)
i like how it was different to typical stories
jonothan and jaye are cute haa

AW it's over!
-sobs-
great story though.
:D

I really like the story but... Where the heck did that bullet come from. Plus, I thought she was in school so how would there be a shooting star in the sky? I am confused. Other than that, though, I love it! Really good job!

FANTASTICO! really,really good...

ive read some really good stories on here so far... and you are really good with the humour thing im juust not so sure these seem like eleventh graders so much ya know? but sides" that its a really good storyline and fantastic use of humour... for it is hard to write a full story here on fictionpress. and i salute you!

Witchita, Ka. . . . has a governor. . . . . o-kay. . . . *pulls out shotgun and proceeds to commit suicide*

cry! that was so cute i love bathroom stale number. I'm so sad because it is over!

WOW :D
I loved your story. I'm glad you finished it and didn't drop it because it would have been a pity. Really. ^^
I just wanted to let you know that.
Oh and I'm adding this story to my favourites.

aww, the beginning was so cute. ;) i liked it, it sounded really interesting. time for chapter two.

bleh lazy to login
anyways i just wanted to say woot california >D srry xD and awsome stry

that was soo funny...I'm turning red from laughing so damn hard!

Cute story. I loved Jack he was so funny. I enjoyed reading your story. They are a great couple.

I thought Wendy had never had a boyfriend before, cuz it said in an earlier chappie that she was wondering what her mom would say if she knew she had a boyfriend so i was just wondering.

"Mrs. Gray handed me a detention slip for 'putting the idea into Jack's head that the Holy Child does drugs'."

Best. Quote. Ever. :]

But that was pretty good. I can't wait to keep reading!

i love the chapter and the drama! please update soonER!