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Operation Miranda 2006-12-14 . chapter 1
Wonderful. I love the repetition. I can hear the intonations resonating from the words. Hmm, is that a sign I've lost my mind?
GirlxAnachronism 2006-12-14 . chapter 1
I love the idea of challenging yourself

"You think I can’t fly or freefall?"

It seems like your asking yourself throughout the whole poem, questioning yourself. I like it and then end with that question. Very well wrritten.
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