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| Jamith 2007-07-10 ch 1, | abuseWHAT? Why? |
| Louise Washington 2007-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was pretty good. I really liked this story. Heh, I sound morbid when I say that. None the less, it was well written with good emotional impact. |
| ??? 2007-01-07 ch 1, anon. | abusei dont get whether she killed herself or her teacher. it was really good, and i could practically feel all those emotions you described perfectly. |
| Atelophobia 2006-12-22 ch 1, | abuseI love this. It's fantastic, the way you tell the story through flashbacks and how the whole thing really happens within minutes, but it tells an entire story. The ending took me completely by surprise, but it doesn't feel out of place. |
| oO 2006-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like the feeling of the story, but honestly, I don't know what's going on. I mean they met and she had a flashback and she killed herself? huh? I am confused... |
| Leonharte 2006-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a rollercoaster of emotions. I love how you set the ending up at the start. It then becomes inevitable. |