W-What?

Woah, that caught me completely off guard. Why did she kill her lover? I'm confuzled, but I guess it worked all right. Nice story, very well written. It flowed perfectly almost all the way through. Well done!

oh my...I'm speechless...but...why? to kill because of love, to kill? why? _

WHAT? Why?

Wow, that was pretty good. I really liked this story. Heh, I sound morbid when I say that. None the less, it was well written with good emotional impact.

i dont get whether she killed herself or her teacher. it was really good, and i could practically feel all those emotions you described perfectly.

I love this. It's fantastic, the way you tell the story through flashbacks and how the whole thing really happens within minutes, but it tells an entire story. The ending took me completely by surprise, but it doesn't feel out of place.

I like the feeling of the story, but honestly, I don't know what's going on. I mean they met and she had a flashback and she killed herself? huh? I am confused...

What a rollercoaster of emotions. I love how you set the ending up at the start. It then becomes inevitable.