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Liviania
2008-07-14
ch 20,
abuseMan, I missed a ton of chapters. Aw, and just as Mercy and Izzie were getting over their angst! No school to tell them drugs aren't the answer. It's an interesting contrast to how sweet Sin and Alice are.

Livi
magalina
2008-07-11
ch 20,
abuselol You are not predictable at all! XD And dammit, Izzie... This is not good..Poor Mercy D: Oh, is Reuven from another story? :o
omg-wtf
2008-07-10
ch 17,
abuseFirst review with my new computer xD


I got all pissed off when I seen the Jamesifer McBitchinson. I was all WHO THE HELL!?

but then i remembered xD
The Intelligent Designer
2008-07-10
ch 20,
abuseWoah, I didn't see that coming at all! Nice twist in the plot there!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Catseye*Rose
2008-07-09
ch 20,
abuseW00t! I guessed right! XD Er, of course...that led to badness... I feel sorry for both of them. Izzie, cuz he feels betrayed and everything, and Mercy, because he just tried to do what's best for his brother. Of course, I'm on Mercy's side for this. It's not the best life, but it sure sounds better than what they had before! No, drugs are not the answer! ...I hope that wasn't enough Vicodin to cause an overdose... (I have no idea what amount would lead to an OD... O_o) And Izzie goes off to go have sex with a stranger again! How he doesn't have a million STDs is beyond me... *Sigh* The pair of them... Looking forward to the next chapter!
narcissistic
2008-07-09
ch 20,
abuseo. vicodin. the drug of choice for every underage.
Love Eternally
2008-07-08
ch 20,
abuseI loved it! IT was so sad.
Broken Bright Eyes
2008-07-06
ch 19,
abuseHey, hey.. didn't I say I was worried you had flushed yourself fown the toilet? Or so I recall..
Mhmm..
You know..
Whenever I think--more like read-- about Espen.. I think he looks like Prince Caspian from that Narnia thing. :] He's sexy. xD
Anyhoo.. Izzie's a weird kid.. and.. Alice is very gay.. ehm.. jailbait, much? Unless little Sin is..seventeen?
And I missed your birthday? :O Happy late birthday
Chasmodai Blue
2008-07-03
ch 19, anon.
abuseI've commandeered my friends computer, which doesn't like interwebs. So no log in. You bloody know who I am.

Um...concrit? No, not really. Just a bit hard to keep track of who is talking since they're all 'he', so you can has warning. Also, I like Izzie, as well as Sin/Alice touchies. They please.

If I write you something brilliant as a not-your-birthday-gift, do I get whored out too?**

**You'll have to do battle with my magical pimp and zeir purple stick of dreams though. Ze goes for the ankles.
narcissistic
2008-07-03
ch 19,
abuseMwahahaha it works this time! haha i actually have really poor memory so i forgot what i said so i had to click back to the reviews and read mine..haha but than it all came back to me.
Casey and the Sunshine Bear...
2008-07-02
ch 19,
abuseI'm going to name my future kid Alixe so he won't be emo and run off to join a one-arm band and get into hard drugs to block out the emotional pain of his oh so boring Alex name.

You may not ask about the wall but I'm going to explain it to you.

OKay if there was a wall and it was covered in gross poop and pee and gangster stuff. Wouldn't that just catch your attention? No one is going to ignore that. Some may even want to take pictures of it.

It could be under a sewage pipe so it makes sense.

Ever time I think of sewage pipe (which isn't ever often), I think of Cat Woman.
Catseye*Rose
2008-07-02
ch 19,
abuseOoh, it was Izzie! That...actually makes a lot of sense. I love Izzie ^^ He's such a nut. And poor Alice...I bet he has a concussion now, the way his luck goes. Oh, Espen. He's so bitchy. I wonder if Alice really is gonna go back at night...? Or if he'll forget...hmm... Oh, mysterious prostitute...only two options I can see: mother or Mercy. But I could be dead wrong. Guess we'll see later, eh? Anyway, Sin and Alice are still freaking adorable (aw, they kissed), just this side of sickeningly sweet. I still love them. Looking forward to the next chapter!
The Intelligent Designer
2008-07-02
ch 19,
abuseI love people that don't know how to laugh anymore. It shows just how fucked they are...
magalina
2008-07-01
ch 19,
abuseWha- No! DD: Well, as long as they´re happy... Sin should laugh more often. And dammit, I keep picturing Espen as a centaur >:o One with a knight´s helmet...he was in some movie/cartoon. I don´t remember which.

Ooh, who was the person Izzie saw?? His mom? Maybe she´s not really dead...? I don´t think that´s possible though -.- Mmh, can´t wait to find out~

And I love that you´re updating this one often! :DD
Ty Taco
2008-07-01
ch 19,
abuseLike the Sin/Alice-ness?
No hunni...I LOVE IT!
This chapter was great...
So next time you wanna talk yourself down...
DON'T!

Can't wait for chapter 20.
xoxoxoxoxoxo,
Ty

PS-
I wonder who Izzie was so frightened of.
Hm...
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