I like this. The descriptions are so great and interesting. I like the tone of it as well.

that was a nice play on the whole idea. I really liked all the names.

I really like the line about lust being an enzyme... that's an interesting metaphor

this exactly how i feel...which you capture so perfectly. nice title as usual :P

nice personification

I dont know enough music to appreciate the first stanza as much, but I do like the last one a lot

I really like the last line...

I really like that first stanza

I like the last line... it's kinda funny, but very cute

I like this one.. the whole earthquake thing and the whole sleeping through it.. really great

I love the first line of the second stanza... and the youtube reference

There's dreams... isn't it there are?
the first stanza was really beautiful, but the last line was my favorite mainly because I

I really love the italicizing

I love the sea metaphor.. awesome job

Nice nature and color imagery