This one is good too!

not the cheery sort...i do love the mood of the poem... though i shouldnt because it's basically saying that we'll all become fertilizer. and it certainly doesnt potray anythig in a positive light

What really makes this poem are the three lines:

"when you die, your body becomes fertilizer for

beautiful white flowers that will be

crushed underneath the boots of soldiers,"

You really hit a rhythm right there, combined with strong imagery. The first two sentences (from "Everyone is good..." to "...people around you") isn't terrible, but isn't really great.

This is a nice short piece, with a mild opening that is saved by a few good lines at the end. Well done.

Wow, what a great explanation of the circle of life.

Gh.

This is fantastic.

Just...really powerful.