Reviews for White Flowers Blooming In The Mud

Dalamar's Girl 2007-07-14 ch 1,	abuseThis one is good too!
Technical-Difficulties 2007-01-31 ch 1,	abusenot the cheery sort...i do love the mood of the poem... though i shouldnt because it's basically saying that we'll all become fertilizer. and it certainly doesnt potray anythig in a positive light
MrFlames 2007-01-05 ch 1,	abuseWhat really makes this poem are the three lines: "when you die, your body becomes fertilizer for beautiful white flowers that will be crushed underneath the boots of soldiers," You really hit a rhythm right there, combined with strong imagery. The first two sentences (from "Everyone is good..." to "...people around you") isn't terrible, but isn't really great. This is a nice short piece, with a mild opening that is saved by a few good lines at the end. Well done.
Travis C. Eckert 2006-12-29 ch 1,	abuseWow, what a great explanation of the circle of life.
spiked punch after midnight 2006-12-14 ch 1,	abuseGh. This is fantastic. Just...really powerful.