The informal essay structure didn't really work for your subject. This is one issue that would look and sound better as a formal essay.

Your sentence structure could use some improvement as well.

If you would like to discuss the political fallacies with regards to your essay reply back. I don't like having political arguements in the review section.

Even speaking as someone who is usually annoyed by Dubyacentric apocalyptic whining (not because I like Bush II, but because I don't think he's particularly important), and who thinks analogies are almost always lame, I have to say I agree that Godwin's Law is retarded.

Your paragraph formatting is a little messy.