The feelings in this poem are well presented, strong, and relatable. My only criticism here would be the placing of the lines in the parenthesis; in some parts it seems a bit awkward to read. But other than that, I really like this a lot. Very well done, keep writing!

That rhyming didn't flow so well... I think I was hearing the wrong music or something in my head for this one...

I just wanted to say, There is no such thing as sanity, insanity, good, or evil. All these misconceptions are terms we use to describe our perspective in life. There is no terms for the dycotimy that the inner soul goes through. The only term for this I have it: existance or maybe better yet just plain old life!

Liz

Nice reflective piece. It flows very well. Much good poetry is written about indecision and contradiction. I like this one very much! Yay for more poetry!

Miss you and hope to talk to you soon. The lines "how crazy I am (when I should be sane)" really speak right now...

-Rachel

gaudeo indeed. nice framing of thoughts :)

clear, to the point, yet beautiful in its own simple way. Though i almost want ot say too simple. Still i see where you're comin from, and i truly like it.