I saw the link to your profile on TeenHelp and I have to admit, I've fallen in love with your poems.
This one especially really touches me, it's wonderfully emotional.

So powerful. I like the point of view from which the poem is written. I like how you explore different points of view on a variety of topics. You truly are talented. You've really captured the hopelessness that occurs within a person when they are on the brink of suicide. That's a difficult position to be in and write about and still survive. Often suicidal thoughts will take over-don't let hopelessness control you. Your talent is so amazing :)

Well expressed. I can kinda relate. Always be positive. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^