This is so good! So any updates now? I really like it! I think it's funny and yet it's cute with the name Chazz being called Cheerio that's kind of cute...
And that other part where she had a pool of her own blood on the ground, and her arm was inner elbow was sticking out. Ouch! That sounds pretty painful... And she even had a small of the wall sticking into her stomach that hurts even more doesn't it? Wow! So yah! Keep them coming please? I want to read more on these and as for me I should probalby try to work on my story a bit more... But, right now I am, "attempting" to make a handmade manga book right now... So yeah, if there's no updates then I am, very sorry but, it would to have to be becuase of that... So yeah I am, so sorry if I went on and on... So how are doing agian?

Eh, spelling, spelling, spelling. Oh and work on getting them to be more real. Its his sister so why’s he sitting down to dinner instead of actively getting that info?

not a bad start to the story. it has an interesting ring to it but i suggest that you be sure to spell check. otherwise, it was a good story.