Hey just wanted to tell you I love your story. Although I haven't finished it yet. Mostly the real reason for the review is to tell you I would give just about anything to be a "supplemental woman". How cool would that be? Since I'm writing a reveiw I guess I should tell you that I really like how you explain everything between the black-coats and the white-coats. You give enough information that I understand what's happening but not too much that it takes the mystery out of it. It kind of reminds me of Dune. It also leaves lots of room for sequels or spin offs. Hint hint nudge nudge
(I haven't looked on your profile yet so don't hit me if there already is one). It's okay if there isn't I'll just make up my own stories (in my head I don't write) Sorry this review is so long and rambling. To end on a good note your story is awesome and so are your others (that I've read)

25: Since you asked, I think the love scene could have used a few more adjectives. This is the hottest sex ever, two minds becoming one, but "He came to the feeling of the hand on the outside and the sparks on the inside, and the clenching of the body around him" is a physical description of a mind altering experience.

I go more for a description of what it felts like emotionally: pressure building, added sensation, heat rising, the feel of Eph calling his name (hearing and speaking), being both surrounded and surrounding, more than anything he's ever felt, the world shrinking, volcanic heat, pressure great enough that stars ignite, having every stroke and thrust be perfect because he is both and each and all, want and need and friction and sounds and smells and epic pleasure that feels eternal and bigger than the universe. And slowly, slowly coming down from the greatest high of his life.

But that's just me.

27:"intended too" to

What about Eph's block? Is he going to have to wear it forever? That's what is tying his mind into knots, isn't it? And the white- and black-coats? Will they continue to be 'enemies' since all the important people now know they aren't?

But I really enjoyed reading this as well as your other stories. As you can probably tell by now, I review everything I read. That way I can quickly spot whether I've actually read something or just planned on reading it. Now that I've finished your work I'm off to devour someone else's.

Keep up the good work.

1:"defiantly in one of his moods" definitely

I'm not sure I like Chase, but he sure is interesting.

3:"up whit a whole" with

4:"“That was stupid, Chase.”" what exactly did Chase do? Eph was the one who grabbed Tyler's arm and asked him questions he didn't want to answer.

"He ran off when he was twelve... he’d barely been twelve when his brother ran away" Twins?

6:"Almond Station" wasn't it Walnut?

17:Was the info dump really necessary? I barely skimmed it, so I hope it wasn't.

18:"looked like looked like"

21: I didn't realize how much I missed your comments at the end of each chapter until I got one.

22: It's way too late to finish this tonight, but this way I have something to read in the morning.

I had actually started reading that when it was still ongoing (don't think I had rewieved then though) and I am quiet glad that I was able to find it again even after so long. By the way I like your summary. Now to serious business, the story was great, the main characters great, but all your main characters tend to have the same kind of mishievious humour which I supposed is yours so no grat wonder there. I liked Tiffany's character because she was really different but at the same time something with her was rather off (what I couldn't telle though). I liked your plot and the betas and I thank you for that great moment of reading.

Well, I've been registered here in fictionpress for years but never truly read much here; mostly I play in fanfictiondotnet. Now I see what I've been missing. You're quite talented. I love this so far.

I'm sorry for this sorry review--I'll write a better one next time around. It's 2 in the morn here. I'll just say I'm in love with your characters.

My only complaint is that you describe them after I've already created a picture of them, lol.

My eyes are closing on their own,(yawn) gotta go. I'll read more tomorrow but I thought since I'm faving this I should at least give a few words of apreciation.

You have officially sparked my interest.

i'm too laze so i'm just gonna drop some random comments on ya; Eph is fine cuz he's calm and sweet, and what will the "authorities" have to say about black&white coats having a relationship? then it's not like they gonna let Eph live with a bigass BLOCK in his head forever and maybe then he must return to the white side and yada yada, so one of the plot's biggest red strings feels unresolved!! and the last chapter feels a bit rushed merely cuz of the cliffhanger ending, still u got some nasty talet there and now i'm gonna read some more of yours, todoloo

Ew guinea pig as minilivestock!

I don't really have a very long review to right, because i loved it all!

i really hope there is a sequel out there somewhere, because if there is im GOING to read it.

i think i have a few favourite characters, chase is awesome! and so is Ace, i want one of my own, he's just so full of 'tude!

the only thing i would say is it seemed to me that the last chapter was a bit rushed, i can't really fault the rest, but i was wondering if you were a bit relieved to be nearing the end, cos i think it could have been a bit less skimmed over. although thats a fault i quite happily recognise in myself and so im now going to take some of my own medicine.

anyway really really really liked it, and am now going to read some more of you fics.

p.s. i may have been contemplating not leaving review, but it was too good not to

At first I wanted to say Eph, then you mentioned the Elrad Project (really interesting name ^^) and my favorite would just have to be Tim. He just makes me smile for no real reason... Favorite joke is the walking water one >.> Favorite scene is probably when the Heroes of Black and White exchanged MUGs. Least fav scene was when that...thing Tiffany walked onto stage. Biggest problem is I always thought (still think) Chase tops. I love, love, love the characters, puns, and setting.

As for insults...not really insults, but I didn't really like the romance/snuggling/sex part. Not that they were bad, but I was more interested in the story. Why is everyone gay? After the umpteenth gay person/couple shows up, it just stretches reality too much. z.z Just minor points. This story is just wonderful, and I love the random customs and names, like Seahorses, starfish, orchids, fruit names (Strawberry), and book names. Very inventive. Read this in one sitting ^^

Oh yay, survey! I love surveys, as long as they aren't 250 questions long...
1) Favorite Character: It's between Chase and Eph. I'd have to go with Chase though. Why? He's a lot like me, his jokes and sarcasm match up with mine perfectly.
2) Favorite joke/pun: I love the walking water one too. Actually, I saved the line into a word document I have full of random stuff like that. (I'm weird, so sue me!)
3) Favorite scene/chapter: I have to pick?
4) Actually, I thought everything was really good.It was easy to understand, and I like how you included history so we could better understand what everything was.
5) I guess my least favorite chapter was the first one- No Eph!
6) I loved how you didn't include character descriptions, because almost everyone describes the lead male character as blond. No offense to any blonds, but I like dark-haired guys. Besides, I could make up pictures of everyone in my head.
7)No insults really. I loved it all!

Worlds End... I remember that from somewhere... Oh yeah, Kingdom Hearts! I knew it seemed familiar. Did you take the name from Kingdom Hearts or come up with it on your own? I love that game... Riku's sexy as hell. =D
Anyways, the last part of the chapter, the sex, I was blushing the whole time. I loved it. =) After I finish reading this story, I'm going to go check out some of your other stories! Yay for slash! =)

"One of the genetic patterns the Beta Scientists had created affected a woman’s fertility so that she could neither have her periods nor children without taking certain supplements."

I want to be engineered like that so badly. I don't want kids and I don't want periods. Life is so unfair!

Oh, and I love the bit about Eph and Chase in the flower-transporter-ma-bob (I'm too lazy to go see what its actual name is.).

I really do like the MUG technology. It's a very cool idea, and the way you make them seem like they are mainstream technology, but not very useful in outer planets is really ingenious. It makes me think of wireless internet. You can only pick it up from so far away. Most people would make the MUGs omnipresent and have some really insane abilities. But you make the MUGs seem like they are completely possible technology for the future, not just futuristic dreams of science fiction authors and readers. I can almost imagine owning a MUG someday. Honestly, I kind of want one right now... ^_^; And I love the hacking. I kind of want to know how to hack. Not that I would actually use the hacking skill if I had them, but it would be a nice feeling to know how hack. You know, just in case. (In case of what?!) And sorry for not reviewing on all of the chapters, but I kind of got absorbed into the story and was more concerned with reading the next chapter than giving feedback. Yeah, I know, not nice of me. Anyways, this is an awesome story, and I really can't wait for myself to stop typing this review and go on to the next chapter! =P

History teachers are only as interesting as their subject allows them to be. I've hear that somewhere before, and I must disagree. My history teacher this year... Or last year, depending on how you want to look at it, taught US History. And that is boring, especially when using a college textbook. But Mr. Freccia made it interesting by digging up strange facts, like Woodrow Wilson (I think it was) used to feed squirrels on the White House lawn. Chase's version of history made it all easy to understand and interesting.