This story is god i luv it. Chase

this story is great! there should be a hell of a lot more reviews on it considering the quality. i'm liking the captain x eph relationship so far-very steamy! looking forward to seeing how it develops. need to go back and re-read the white coat/black coat thing because I'm confused as to which is which. keep up the excellent work!

i like the story so far but i hope that ure not planning to get the kid an the captain together because 12 and and a 23 year old is a bit weird but if ure not then great first chapter :)