 Orual 2007-03-19 . chapter 1Simple and bittersweet. I wrote a poem about something like this once. I think it's something everyone goes through. Your description of Yesterday as fleeting is perfect. That is certainly how the past always looks in light of the present. |
 softlycryingrain 2007-01-18 . chapter 1aw, that's sad :( Well written tho, you successfully portrayed your emotions through the poetry. Good job! |
 Ironic Presence 2006-12-15 . chapter 1Oh, yesterday... I felt depressed before I read this, and this poem (no offense) only made me feel more depressed. Your poems always perfectly convey whatever emotion you want emphasized. They're amazing. You're amazing. Keep writing. |
 Maggot Blood 2006-12-15 . chapter 1All my friends left for college and I don't see them anymore and this was really refreshing to read, good work.
Wolf. |