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| L. X. Petrik 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseSee, now you're taking me too literal. Find differnt rhyming scemes to prevent yourself from cookie cutting every poem you write. No one wants to see the same movie twice. |
| Ashelin 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseThe flow is so rhythmatic, it seems like a nursery rhyme. A scary one at that. It is very sad, and yet true. It makes me angry and deppressed that people think like that, and that it is usually us who do it to them. Great job. -Ashelin |