Oh, this is so good! I really love your writing, it's humourous, slightly dark, and exciting all at the same time. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my word. That is one crazy train ride.

gah...sorry for taking so long to review, but here I am, finally!

Verity surprised me a bit by this chapter, with all her savage beatings, but Aldous is still as cool as a cucumber. (How does he DO that?!) Lol, the Doctor Who xmas special... I dunno why, I just found the whole theme funny.

Awesomely fun chapter!

I laughed my way through this chapter. It was incredibly brilliant, as well as downright hilarious. Alduous is magnificent, and there is no other way to put it.

Brilliant!! :D

what a Brilliant chapter! i loved every single word of it! the end took me by surprise though... i find it hard to believe, too. aldous seems like a guy who has great difficulty dying.

yeesh, he's just having a great day, isn't he?

Sorry i took so long to review. . .

But anyways, I think this was one of the most exciting chapters yet. It was hilarious. :D Alduous might be certain, but I'm not sure which side is which - Protect or MI6.

intresting very intresting as the elder asquith would say
who is the real MI6 i still remember the good verity in the past book but is she now evil?
gregory showing a bit of guts and cleverness nowadays and even a bit of quick wit-dark materials comment lol although in my opinion lord of the rings is better
the elevator trick was pretty class but it seems that aldous as lost some of his insanity and hes lost some of his old classic lines which i thought made him as a charcter
but perhaps thats only cos we're in a rather serious part that he's lost this
look forward to the next chappie sooner rather than later please lol
keep writing
wilko

very well written... i havent had the chance to read it all (off to school with me!) but it's very good so far. can't wait for my seven hours of monotony to be up! keep going with this!

It's amazing how he manages to keep his temper all the time... unless someone gets away from him.

:) CD

woohoo!! after all that hard work, all alduous gets is a needle!

ohh *squeals* now that was fun! can't wait to see if lloyd and the other what's-his-name can get asquith on their side. that'd be very exciting. :)) great chapter!

haha, aldous meets his match. :D that was great, i love aldous. he's loads of mad fun.

excellent.

:) CD