you write wonderfully.

Wow. This has amazing imagery. The story itself is well-fleshed, and then with the addition of all the details, it's really a fantastic piece of writing. You use such interesting phrases, too, like "the yellowing curve of burning books" and "tree bark curls." Just fabulous work. I do love it. Keep writing! :)

Great poem, alot of cool lines that make me smile and it was all around really good. Keep it up.

Wolf.

gorgeous.

his lips crack into dusty gravelly lines, i am totally in lvoe with that line. in fact, i may have it's babies.

you are incredible.

I like this, a lot. I don't know why. It is just so, appealing, the word phrasing I suppose. Wonderful job. I absolutely adore the first two lines. Great job.

-Ashelin