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| Sadistikal 2007-01-18 ch 1,  | abuseI like how he smashes the carton in her face! I probably already reviewed this on Deviant Art but I'm not too sure. Either way this was really funny! Keep writing! |
| hateandkill-D 2006-12-20 ch 1, | abuseI'm sorry! I could've sworn I reviewed this... Anyway, I love it! GREAT JOB! Keep it up! |
| vampiric-happenings 2006-12-16 ch 1, | abusethis is spectacular! in a horrificly satisfying sort of way. Well, for one,"--"Well, for one,"; you're not your in the last quotation. this was well written! nice work! :D |
| xCorix 2006-12-15 ch 1, | abuseeerie... i'll get constructive: you're not your. (that ALWAYS bothers me so many people do it!) i like it... in a creepy kinda way. |