I like how he smashes the carton in her face! I probably already reviewed this on Deviant Art but I'm not too sure. Either way this was really funny! Keep writing!

I'm sorry! I could've sworn I reviewed this... Anyway, I love it! GREAT JOB! Keep it up!

this is spectacular! in a horrificly satisfying sort of way.

Well, for one,"--"Well, for one,"; you're not your in the last quotation.

this was well written! nice work! :D

eerie... i'll get constructive: you're not your. (that ALWAYS bothers me so many people do it!)

i like it... in a creepy kinda way.