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Karekii 2009-11-16 . chapter 10
I usually, being an incredible sap, can't stand anything without a happy ending. But this hardly ended in any final sense and I loved it that way. I mean it /could/ have gone on until Alec runs around, ending up right in waiting Terry's arms... but it kind of felt like suicide at the height of one's career. Left me loving it and the good still going. You have a wonderful talent, mr. author.
StangenBaer 2009-10-23 . chapter 10
This story was absolutely hilarious, with a pinch of angst!

No worries, I was laughing my ass off when Alec made out with Terry's shirt... Oh, the wonders of alcohol... :D
cp 2009-10-19 . chapter 6
OMG can this get any hotter
cp 2009-10-18 . chapter 1
hot hot hot hot, this amazingly hot. I wasn't expecting him to succeed, always waiting for the humaliation to com
galexies-away 2009-10-06 . chapter 10
Huh. Strange. I like the way that he went through this totally mindblowing thing that one would think would change who he was completely and then he pretty much just stays the same. It's nice that you never redeem your asshole characters. They just stay assholes. Like John stayed a Republican. But at the same time... there is something just slightly different and it makes me think so much more.

Oh yeah. It was also fucking hil-ar-i-ous.
galexies-away 2009-10-06 . chapter 9
Hellener Kellener! fat ee gay! Hilarious. But also incredibly painful. Made me kind of wanna cry.
galexies-away 2009-10-06 . chapter 4
you rock at sex scenes. Makes me happy.
galexies-away 2009-10-06 . chapter 1
Fuck! I LOVED IT! That was just way too funny, I cannot believe you were drunk and managed to write that. buzzed, maybe. drunk? no way! I can barely even think in chronological order when drunk, let alone make a beautifully written piece of hilarity.
You are amazing.
toriew 2009-09-27 . chapter 10
I really enjoyed this story, but at the same time it makes me very sad... I don't know why :/ Your writing style is very entertaining, and I loved it because it gave Alec a deep and realistic personality. Please consider making a sequel to this fic, even if it is only a oneshot, I think it would give more closure.
Ziusura 2009-08-21 . chapter 10
I've read this before, but I don't think I'd given a review last time. You've got some skill to capture me in a story reading it the second time through. I struggle with sitting through movies I like and haven't seen, so I commend your skill for keeping me in the story.

I love the end of it. Everything came to end in a circle, giving it closure without actually telling us if he and Terry worked out. I'm not much for the cheesy romantic endings, although I won't say I don't like them, so this gave a pleasant dose of the real world.

One of my favorite scenes was when Alec was having his drunken mental breakdown. I love conflict and boys crying over other boys, as weird as this is going to sound, I like the way it feels. I loved that scene for more than just my love for mental breakdowns, I loved the screaming, the crying, and especially the comparison between his vomit and his soul. I felt really tuned in with Alec's emotions after reading that bit. The brick wall he hit, the feeling of desperation, and hitting rock bottom...well I can't find the right words to end that thought but I think (or hope) you get what I mean.

Pure smut is a guilty pleasure of myself and many others, and you've filled that well. But you also included story that made me want to read it again and again. I'm rambling so I should probably end this now, but either way, I really loved this story.
Crimsonoaks 2009-08-19 . chapter 10
while i'm not thrilled that they arent together at the end (im a horrible romantic) this story is still brilliant beyond recognition. i love his stream of consciousness and completely fucked up everything. For an ending that i dont quite like (remember my romantic thing) it still managed to wrap things up wonderfully while still giving hope that they will end up together in the future. Kudos to the hundredth degree!
HolehCrapWeenie 2009-08-13 . chapter 6
oh god that is so true.
=)) i AM underaged.
but no one can STOP MEE! >:)>:)>:)
ya that's right.
=))
but i want Dennis/Alec. :(
HolehCrapWeenie 2009-08-13 . chapter 5
OH NO! =))
HAHAHAHA. OH NO.
but yes! As hot as that kiss what, I prefer Dennis to Terry. *shrugs* IDK WHY. =))
Deaths.Last.Prayer 2009-08-04 . chapter 10
I love this story to pieces.
blissfully nameless 2009-08-03 . chapter 10
I have to say this story ended up being one of the most unexpected, surprising stories ever. I read the first chapter, got a good laugh, read on to the next few chapters, expecting an easy, fluffy read, a bit of smut and an overall cliched ending.

I was wrong because what I did not expect what the intensity of the emotions. And the fact that Alec would actually deal with his fear of commitment and fear of putting himself out in the open and vulnerable like that. It was just so... intense. I figure I should have expected it since it is categorized as Humor/Angst, but I didn't actually pay attention to that fact until after I was done with the story.

The last line? Pure fucking brilliance.

I'm glad Alec didn't end up changing all that much. It was... realistic. Refreshing.

I'm in love with your writing.

Any chance for a sequel?
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