Oh, pretty. It's one of those very overarching poems that encapsulates a lot in a few words. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)

"lighting my tragedy, so bright" is pretty wonderful. It's just ... wow. Pretty awesomely powerful. Good job!

Felicia.

This is really good, well done. Keep writing.

Anna _

I love the idea of a lit-up tragedy, in bright sunlight. The rhythm to this is lovely.