|Reviews for Chariot Of The Sun|
| no.peace.los.angeles 12/17/06 . chapter 1
Oh, pretty. It's one of those very overarching poems that encapsulates a lot in a few words. Beautiful. Keep writing! :)
| felicia13 12/16/06 . chapter 1
"lighting my tragedy, so bright" is pretty wonderful. It's just ... wow. Pretty awesomely powerful. Good job!
| Princess-anna57 12/16/06 . chapter 1
This is really good, well done. Keep writing.
| Jezsh 12/16/06 . chapter 1
I love the idea of a lit-up tragedy, in bright sunlight. The rhythm to this is lovely.