I liked This...alot specialy the lyics they rock though there r little spelling mistakes other than that this rocked!

I did like it. You had a few spelling errors, but other than that it was just really sweet.

okay, so I had to review on this one since I write songs and I'm always interested in other people's song lyrics since I'm SO bad at writing my own. anyways, I really liked this. I liked how it was very meaningful, but really made sense and wasn't really confusing at all. great job! and I love Fleetwood Mac. I hope that you end up writing music for this song and your others. If you haven't written music before then just some advice: when you start out and you totally suck, don't get discouraged. it took my months to come up with something that didn't make me completely sick when playing it. :)

Aww. So sweet. I like the dragon analogy you use. Great job.

I did like it. Do you play an instrument? I envy anyone who can hear music in their head and then write lyrics to match it. My son does that. Wonder where he got such amazing talent? Anyhow, good job. By the way, I love your "profile." That is such a lovely, fantastical poem. And of course, I especially love that it has a French title. =) Truly, Tourterelle, relever de deuil

Lovely. I don't actually know the tune, but the lyrics are touching and sincere. Almost a play on words at the end: "On your dragon, fly" versus "dragonfly". Very nice