More ideas are forming as the time goes. Introduction of the new characters erika and aki's younger brother adds another new dimension to ther story instead of the 2 main characters. In addition the suspense of the family line makes readers want to continue and read more. good work~ keep it up! look forward to the next entry.

It's a very interesting story! Like i said, it's like a book-you-can't-put down kind of story! =) Keep up the good work and i wanna know how the story's gonna develop so keep writing! Sometimes it does get a little draggy with the continuous dialogue and also cant really digest the names but i'm getting there. =) Jia you!

This is an awesome story!! Keep writing please!!

((groans)) that erika girl seems annoying all ready.
i like torikawa, but not her.
she sucks.
bleh.
but anyways, keep writing, this story is... idunno the word. oh well. is amazing.

awesome read!

interesting story line. descriptive words create images in my mind. look forward to the possibility of aki and sekai becoming a couple.

Interesting story on views of both characters Kuromura Aki and Torikawa Sekai. The descriptions set me thinking with an imaginery setting in my mind. The plot was also fantastic as the typical characteristics of a male and a female were switched. Look forward to your next entry.

HATE IT!

WHY?





because i always hate it when chapters end if i love it...
which means that, yeah, i love it.
oh, by the way-- congrats. you are sticking to this story. i can't stick to my stories.


HONTONI ARIGATOU.

continue the story!hahaha..hmm okok,so far overall the story is quite well-developed, in-depth analysis of both characters and has a really nice story setting..=)

bwmph y? i must know NOW!

gao. i really like this story. i keep trying to review, but i'm not sure that it's working out... eh... well, update, onegai!
`xwic

even tho i had a little problems with the names, i felt that it was well written. good job, keep going. o and also, i think that the story could have used more detail about the setting, if anything.