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| Taltush/MeiMei 2006-12-16 ch 1,  | abuseIt is sad, and possibly a bit depressing, but I kind of like it. It seems very quiet, if that makes sense, almost reflective. I like the last two lines a lot. They seem to make the poem stronger. |