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| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-01-09 ch 4,  | abuseYay! I read all four chapters of it. I like how you've created a history to everything. It makes sense. I noticed that you included Mrs. Erikson being completely crazy. DreamAtMidnight told me you don't like her. Oh and G-G-Ma Bri? That being you? Or someone sharing your name? Anyways I like it. Cool idea. --stixerz-- |
| .mate.feed.kill.repeat. 2007-01-07 ch 1, | abuseMashed potatoes. That kinda sounds like your real dad... =] I like the first and second chapters, they're all I've read so far cuz I'm lazy. (loser, much? lol) So yea it's pretty cool. Suspenseful. You're really good with this whole story-telling thing. -stixerz- |
| Sheliakena 2007-01-06 ch 1, | abuseheh, i review my own story. just wanted to see if this was possible. |