Great job describing the desperation. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.

Twilight Starr

this is beautiful! i read a few of your other poems, and you have a GREAT style. keep up the wonderful work!

aw...a kind of twist on your "classic love-poem" like it alot

Kitty

Very dark.

I like it.

It speaks of a love so strong that you, or the person spoken of, is willing to die for it. While I believe that love is a horrible thing that uses people and takes them to their death most of the time, for the person experiencing this love, it must be the most wonderful moment of pure bliss. Your words confuse me. I cannot seem to decide if you were meaning to say that the love was so strong that anything could not stop it, that is saved a life by guiding it to safety, or that is killed a life by guiding it to its doom.

Well done.

As Always,

Eve