I like this... its a cute little piece of life... with a nice message.. great piece

Starkly poetic: a grim and gritty urban drama with a surprise twist in the tail. I liked the bar-room homily that finished the piece and it gives us pause to think that even if life is not all sunshine and smiles, should everything be taken at its faded face value?

Sorry it's been a while, I've been away. Just thought I'd check in and as always you have something that's worth a read. Okay it's not really a horror piece, but it speaks raw energy and great writing as always.

Great Work

Look forward to more SUPRISES

Wonderfully written, you tell a story very well in poetry. Beautiful detail here. Great work and keep writing.