URG! I am a huge fan of your stories and I never even got to read this one! Please publish this story soon if you plan to, so me and many others can read it and indulge in your wonderfulness! If any of that came out weird, I blame the sugar!

PLEASE publish soon. I miss this story!

wow, that was really, really cute.
aw...

yucky org chem! burn that textbook after finals!

This story was terrific! Stupifying. It is soo different to other stories, where the climax is the characters hooking up. This was so much more, it was life.

heyz. um if i had to change ur writing, id make the passion scens more intense. if i had to change the characters, id change danny into a more forceful and violent possessive boyfriend, and his girlfriend more bitchyer. plus i think id make alaska (lol nice name) more shy and emotional and conan more hard and unemotional, but a very soft sidemaking het fall for him yeah?

[if i haven't mentioned, this is for r_f]

Again, I like the chapters. The lengths are a tad bit on the shorter side, but it's still sufficient to have a general event in each. Good job on that. =]

To me, Ally's kind of on the immature side, I don't know. I feel like at her age, she should be a little bit less naive. But I don't know yet. Maybe that's just her general flaw? I'll find out eventually.

Again, I can't find any mistakes. Maybe I'm missing it? I don't know. But I like how you have no basic errors. That proves that you do in fact proofread your work and that is the best thing you can do for your writing. Congratulations on that. =]

Mmhmm, pretty good story so far.

I liked the way you started it. It was different from the usual 'morning' or 'character introduction' ones. Right off the bat, I could sense Conan's personality without you dictating it in paragraph form. Something interesting actually happened and I really do like that.

There's not really much I can say to criticize this. The grammar is quite good, most likely almost all correct. The sentence flow, to me, works fine and I can't seem to find anything blatantly wrong with it. I love it!

Good job with this.

That was SWEET!

This is really good. I was crying by the end of it too actually. You've done a great job with helping the reader to sympathesize with the characters. I'm going to read the rest of this and see what happens. This is good. I'm adding it to my favorite's.

YAY! I finally found a story I loved that I didn't have to wait for it to be updated! Woo!

Anyway, loved it. Loved it loved it! You should try and get it published. Just make sure that the publishers are alright with it being previously (you'll have to delete it on here) published. I'd so buy it. And copies for a bunch of my friends. Anyway, great job. Awesome. (insert adjective here as I ran out)

~Melody

Conan whispering to the two men that he's getting married was a nice simple touch.

Your works are such wonderful feel good stories I love your style, very sweet and naughty ;) and emotional, overall good keepsakes to be reread later in time. Take care and I'm glad you are unable to write bad characters, ^_^

Really good story so far...I can't wait to read the rest of it!

Conan is so sweet...I can't wait until Alaska realizes how she feels about him!

nice