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Reviews For: The Girl
The Roachy Jay 2007-01-18 . chapter 1
YAY! A Happy Ending! Your poem spoke to me. Good job, Nisha.

-Jay (I think you know me... Ask Jasmine)
Damane 2006-12-18 . chapter 1
That was a touching poem. Good work and continue writing more!
Bloody Penhand 2006-12-17 . chapter 1
Thoughtful. It all really comes around for a resounding end with "I... help/ the girl I used to be." Very powerful, like your other poems, and I can never find anything wrong with your poetry.
angel1357 2006-12-17 . chapter 1
LOVED IT! So pretty... you write wonderful poems! Really though, I wish people were actually like that, it would be nice every once in a while... Keep Writing!
Taltush/MeiMei 2006-12-16 . chapter 1
This is a really good poem. It's kind of sad and frustrating, but very true. Girls can be extremely cruel at times, and this is a good example of it. I like this a lot, and thank you for writing it.
Ashelin 2006-12-16 . chapter 1
This is really sad, reminds me of one of my poems. Except mine ends badly. I hate it when people tease other people. It is so stupid and degrading. I hate it more when I find myself doing it. Man, it is terrible. Great poem.
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