Reviews for Disappointment - FictionPress.com

Honey Beddell 2007-02-09 ch 1,	abuseI've felt such dissapointment too! Like I told this other girl ... I give props to anyone who even attempts a haiku. Cause ... for me, saying something so potent in so little words ... YIKES! :)
Basara 2006-12-19 ch 1,	abusewow... nice...
Guardrail 2006-12-17 ch 1,	abuseVery well written, the feeling in this is vivid and relatable. Wonderful job and keep writing.
lronMaiden 2006-12-17 ch 1,	abuseit's a good poem and you have stuck to the structure, but you haven't stuck to the purpose of a haiku - which is to express an image. Haikus are very visual and concrete, they're rarely just based on an idea or abstract concept.
Princess-anna57 2006-12-17 ch 1,	abuseI like this. :) Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^
effervescent-sentiments 2006-12-17 ch 1,	abuseI'm reviewing this merely because it contains one of my favorite words. "Chagrin" Yay! Nice haiku, I'm proud of you for keeping to the correct "formula." I am not proud of you, however, for spelling it wrong in the last line. Shame, shame. All in all, nice job, keep writing. ~~Dev~~
spiderfly 2006-12-17 ch 1,	abuseI don't know whether it was intentional, but I don't really like the rhyme in this poem. It makes the subject a little less hard-hitting. I love the topic, and the concepts expressed, and the word 'chagrin'. Nice job.