coincidentally, there's a song called Melodies of Life in a video game called Final Fantasy IX... but ehm. Nevermind, I just thought of it when I first saw the title. :D

I love how descriptive this poem was, but there was also quite some awkward wording here and there. And grr, I wish there really was music in Fictionpress, huh?

You know what? I can actually picure this rhythm in my head and the melody to this. Pretty good, I have to say. The words are really pretty and portray the mood accurately. It would have been nicer to have a bridge (verse 3) to make the song longer, but it's nice the way it is. A little awkwardness around the phrasing too, it might be nicer to change a few words here and there. But overall, an enjoyable read :)

beautiful. It would be so much more easier to understand the songs written on fictionpress with music. Besides the little setbacks to the songs here in general, the lyrics themself were great.

i like this. nicely done. and i find it cute. the title fits it well. cool-tastic... X3

this is a very cute song. loved it!

this is really good and nice title

T'is one of those song that makes you smile. ^^ Well done.

it looks really nice... i wish I knew the tune XD