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| Twilight Starr 2008-01-08 ch 1,  | abuseWell written poem. You express the emotions well. Nice work. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Rachel Evans 2006-12-18 ch 1, | abuseYou read this to me last time you came home and, as I told you then, I love this poem. I'm so proud of you for finally telling. I'm really looking forward to your book being published. I think it will do you a lot of good as well as others. I love you so much! *invisihug* |
| Eirien 2006-12-17 ch 1, | abuseHonest, raw, real and touching. As someone who can relate to the topic, I love that last line (as actually everyone would). It presents a nice contrast to the rest of the poem. Nice use of repetition throughout the poem as well. Already by breaking the silence, the speaker fights back at the abuser. Glad you wrote this. *hugs* |