Cute. I like Eve's character a lot - she's the kind of girl to leave a guy a poem telling him that he's hot and comparing him to tobasco sauce (which is by far one of the best "roses are red" poems I've seen, truthfully). That says a lot about her. The brother is maybe a little overdone - unless you're trying to make him out to be OCD or something, I'd tone that down a little, maybe leave the "5 centimeters" bit out. Looks interesting so far. Can't wait to meet her love interest. Keep writing! :)

Hee. I'm loving the journal. It rocks hardcore already. And I don't even know that much about this story yet. (You'll re-send the chapters to me, right?)

Maybe more detail would be nice. Because ... yeah. It's a little sketchy. Well, very sketchy. I don't like that so much. Just a little more would make it ok. And then I'd be incredibly happy! Yay!

p.s. Sorry it took so long for me to review this ... I don't know where my head is sometimes.

Felicia.

Excellent. Right off the bat you learn so much about the character and the storyline without taking away from the intellect of the piece. Her age and personality has been well-captured without inconsistencies. I'm interested in seeing more.

Very nice intro entry in the diary. I enjoyed the sarcasm you had going on oh-so-subtly. Many good things about this...like the fact that it is properly formatted, that always makes a good read.

Haha...more anonymous love notes in lockers!Yay! Lol. I must say, the plot seems very familiar, with the secrecy, lurking around "his" locker to figure out the combo, and such. I am pretty sure you know what I am talking about. Although, I am quite positive that this has not much relevance to that, but correct me if I am wrong. I am curious about that =P.

The dad's character seems interesting. Looking forward to finding out what the friends' characters are like, if you will introduce them, that is.

Hm...oh...nice touch with James Bond, post-its, and Timmy's- they make everything all the more realistic, or maybe I should say that they make a good "cherry-on-top". They're very...well...you =)...and I like that.

This chapter is fantastic and I love the realism of it! Keep up the fabulous work, as I hope and look forward to read more!

I was so sure I reviewed this...well, I apologize for the delay.

On to the review...

This sounds interesting. I hope you will be continuing this. Fantastic intro...you've got me hooked =P. I like the poem too!

Eve using post-its for her writing...that sounds a lot like you. I know many people do it (including me ). I think I am going to get a laugh out of the brother's perfectionist personality.

Like I said, this is a great start, and I hope that you shall continue on this. Hoping to read more...=)

I know a good deal about what this is saying. It is good and if you do not mind I would like to use the poem, and send it to my girlfriend.

O like the starting. Post it note love. Sweet.

Ha ha ... perfectionist brother ... that'd be me. No lie. I hate it when people touch my stuff. Rawr.

So ... I like it. Are you going to continue it? Please say yes. And don't let it die a bit like Glamorous did. Because I liked that one, too. And ... yeah.

Great intro and cool characters. Who's the guy? Want to tell me? Please? I can keep a secret ... and I like knowing things ahead of time because it actually makes the story better for me. I know when it's coming and I can see all the buildup without having to read it more than once. Please, Katherine?

Well, whatever you decide, it's a lovely start. Write on!

Felicia.