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| Taltush/MeiMei 2006-12-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis poem is a bit disorienting. It's kind of crazed and dizzy. The descriptions here are very vivid and clear, along with plenty of very nice metaphors. It's not a "lovely" poem, but a good, kind of creepy one that. Great job. |