Reviews for a view from the room

amphiboly 2006-12-17 ch 1,	abuseTUM TUM! this is magnificento! seriously, i havent checkout out fp in a lo...ong time. and when i saw your author alert i knew it was a calling! hahaha. it was brilliant. keep it up really. the words really flow together and honestly the choice of words and all are brilliant. it's amazing how you managed to connect the 4 seasons together. (: miss you tum! i'll see you soon yeah with S.S )): or maybe some other not-so-cool fesicks teacher! TAKE CARE DARL! ILU!
poetic abortion 2006-12-17 ch 1,	abuseLast line is lovely. Actually, the whole thing is quite lovely in the way that pretty flow and well measured words are. So pretty. So; this just has pretty screaming right at you. - Noelle
no.peace.los.angeles 2006-12-17 ch 1,	abuseOh, wow, this is really pretty. The verb usage in this is outstanding, and so is your word usage in general. I mean, "a riot of eager blossoms," "summer's still steady flame" (yay alliteration), "hard cold ground of crumpled leaves." Just amazing. Wonderful work. Keep writing! :)