 Jane 2008-03-04 . chapter 1 Really great! |
 Politically Incorrect Lamb 2007-10-16 . chapter 1In my head I see a Shel Silverstein-esque hand monster-thing after reading this. Seriously though, this was written like a true poet. Very symbolic. I like ;D |
 JaphyRider 2007-10-14 . chapter 1Thanks for the gracious review.
This is a fantastic, beautiful poem. Your descriptions of the child are brilliant. I like this much. |
 Dragon Fiend Of Doom 2007-05-02 . chapter 1Very nice. Very very nice. I really like the style; it's like the writing in "The Time Traveler's Wife" by Audrey Niffenegger, one of my absolute favorite books. |
 Second-Hand-Screamo 2007-02-25 . chapter 1This is so beautiful. I'm not sure if it's a mother or a friend or just someone who knows the girl speaking, but does it really matter? It paints the picture perfectly, anyway. ( |
 bittersweet.season 2007-02-08 . chapter 1beautiful ending and beginings.
i really enjoyed this. creative. |
 Millay Inspired 2006-12-20 . chapter 1Good, though perhaps influenced by Neutral Milk Hotel? Don't know if you've ever heard them. Anyway, I liked some of the imagery and the feeling of longing and the lack of punctuation mixed with the capitalization. |