I actually understood most of it... a few words i had to look up... anyhow.. I like the ending.. very sad piece... different from your normal work... more straightfoward which is nice.. soemtimes your poems make me think too much lol

I was able translate it pretty well, and what I understood was very beautiful. First stanza was very prettily worded, the second stanza was sort of taunting in a very poetic way, and the last line was my favorite. Even though I don't speak very good spanish, I'm adding this to my favs.