Hey! I have read this story before... was it a birthday gift of mine? :D Anyway, of course this is a nice story (I think I already said that) It's a bit weird to stumble upon someone you know on fictionpress without them actually telling you what their ID was... anyway, this is a review of a story, so I'll stop rambling now. It's a great story- my only qualm about it is that it's too long to read in one stretch, so splitting it into two chapters would be nice. The line "I wondered at that moment whether the Lady Hyuine had addled their minds..." is plain HILARIOUS. It was good reading it again ^_^

I really love this story so far. I love how the story comes alive with the characters. My favorite part has to be when Nani is speaking... it makes for very effective story telling.

Excellent job so far!