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Lunar Eclipse1 2006-12-19 . chapter 1
Heh, this brings me back... Leaving that level of school is a scary couple of steps, but now that I'm in college, I've discovered I'm still having a blast (more freedom, albeit, more responsibility too). However, my graduation from here is sneaking up on me, just around the corner in less than two years...

I really liked the parallelism you displayed between stanzas and the moods throughout the poem. It's a good read.
An-Author-At-Heart 2006-12-17 . chapter 1
Oh I like this! It's nicely written, and the emotions are true and strong, and what a realistic situation! You described it all well, good job!
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