Reviews for Exhibiting Superiority

Talor Derschow 2006-12-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh my god! I can't get over how good it was! I think this story is one of your best yet. Keep up the great writing. I hope you don't ever, ever stop. Your too good to stop anytime soon. From your friend Talor.
Stephanie Leonheart 2006-12-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery nice story. Haven't heard one like that in a while... Pretty out-of-this-world!
Brittany 2006-12-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is an interesting story. I really liked some of the fighting, Mind you it was a bit greusome. I could really see everything in my head while I was reading it. It makes you want to read more to see what else happens. There should definitly be a "sequel." Very nice use of vocabulary, But watch your spelling. And there was a few things that where a bit repetitive. such as "Spitting out blood." I Love the title, Its really creative. Err. Great job. :)
vampire Slayer Lee 2006-12-19 ch 1, anon.	abuse^^ cool...alot of fighting i like, thou i wouldn't wont to be killed by my brother...kind of a cain and able thing going there.